"Aya!" Time to see your new school! mom said "Hai" said Aya
When Aya was walking to her new school and a new uniform. She was so nervous, she was shaking out of her mind. "What do I say, what do I do?"Aya kept sayinh over and over, not looking where she wasd going. Then...bang!
...Itai, gomen gomen! Ah she said It;s you. Gomen Takaki said putting on a straight face, but she was a little mad since this was the second time in just one day.
Again he finds his friends staring at him in disbelif.
After a few moments of staring and slience Aya said " I have to go, Ja ne!" "Mate" said Takaki "Hai "said Aya "What's your name?" asked Takaki "Aya!" she said "Aya" mines Takaki. Here's my number all me if anything happens, okay! he said K, Aya said A bit confused! She didn't even know him and bumping into him twice doesn't count. But she was happy. Why?
Takaki din't know why, but he felt connceted with this girl. She was cute and the first girl who wasn't scared of him.
(Does Takaki like this girl?)
Takaki's POV:Kawaii!!! What's this feeling? Do i like her? No, can't be. I said I'll never love anyone. I promised myself that!
End of Takaki's Pov
Minna we have a new student coming to us from America. Please welcome her "Yamashita Aya!" Sensei told the class. As she walked in she felt girls glaring. She saw boys smiling and some other girls laughing. "Please introduce youself". Senesi said
"Ohayo minna!" "Watashi wa Yamashita Aya!" "I come from America!" I was born and raised there!"
Alright, please sit next to Tegoshi Ren! Sensei told her.
"Hai", As she walked to where her was, she said "I'm glad I introduce myself in all japanese. Good thing, I'm taking japanese and kanji lessons."
"Ohayo!" "Watashi wa Tegoshi Ren desu. Nice to meet you!" "Ohayo!" "Watashi was Yamashita Aya desu. Nice to meet you too!"
At break time (Lunch)
Tegoshi took Aya around the school. And after went to get some lunch in the cafeateria.
They talked about what they liked and disliked! And by the end of the day. It seemed they really good friends.
Over at Takaki's school:Oi...Takaki stop it! Some of his friends yelled out. Not listening, Takaki was beating this guy. Sending him to the hospital! This guy was talking crap about him right in front of Takaki. Not a good idea right!
After things settled down, the principal give Takaki a warning. " If this happens again, you'll be suspend fro three days." "Understand Takaki!" The principal told him
Whatever! Takaki said And walked out. "Oi Takaki, you okay?" "Hm" he said Your lucky you didn't get expelled. they all said "Whatever" he said
Meanwhile:"Ja ne, Tegoshi." Thanks for walking me home. Aya said Sure no problem, Tegoshi said Once Aya got in her house, Tegoshi was smirking in a bad way. In a way like he did a crime or something.
Aya has no idea who she's dealing with. Who is Tegoshi Ren???
Wow... I thought chapter 1 was rushed and confusing. This is more like skimming through than reading about someone's day. Actually, more like a week than a day. They meet and everything happens so fast and they are wondering if they like each other. Again, space it out a bit. Introduce the character, don't throw us the character. Take Twilight for example. Bella meets Edward. It's days before they actually talk and everything. It wouldn't been as successful if they met and a few hours later Bella said, "You're a freakin' vampire!" and Edward says, "I...wow. That was...wow...". I am now really afraid to read chapter 3...
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